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Posted 08 October 2011 - 10:18 AM
After that I started modeling, changed up the design somewhat to make it in my opinion better. I am still not happy with the cockpit and I may completely redesign it, I also may continue detailing since we were given no tri limits. so here they are; Crits are welcomed
Right that's everything so far. Hope to hear some feedback!
Posted 08 October 2011 - 11:22 AM
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Edited by Iconic Drei, 09 October 2011 - 02:10 PM.
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Posted 10 October 2011 - 03:14 PM
Edited by Alex, 10 October 2011 - 03:15 PM.
Posted 10 October 2011 - 03:25 PM
Thanks for the feedback everyone, I made some quick alterations as you all seemed to agree I had overkilled it . The engines are now a little larger but there is only 2 of them, as for the pod I have smoothed it out a little and changed the shape very slightly. I will hopefully add some more detail when I have time.
Front part of the engines look low fidelity compared to the back, simple bevel/extrusions with very clear polygons showing. Where as compared with the rear (Tehe), which looks much more complex and higher fidelity. Why not throw some more polygons at it.
I slightly agree with Alex too about the cockpit, but I do like the design, I would say replace the front part of the pod (The 2 front wings) with something else... Like intakes or mini jets or something.
Also keep in mind F1 cars are designed to stick to the ground... This thing is floating..
Edited by Jestersheepy, 10 October 2011 - 03:26 PM.
Posted 10 October 2011 - 03:26 PM
i love the engines, but i don't think f1 cockpit is working for this pod, maybe try to come up with something more original like u did with the engines? but its really good start for a first project. and i agree with tim, could try add some more edge loops on the corners to make it even better,
More of an advanced crit because your modelling looks good but its the on the cockpit and the engines. But I do agree with Alex that the aesthetics don't match.
Posted 10 October 2011 - 03:34 PM
I hope you got my idea.
And some design critique - put something around the cylindrical front part of the engines, just to break the circular shape. You already did with those flaps on the sides, but I personally think it needs a bit more
Overall, great work so far! Keep it up!
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